I'll try to answer or your comments. XD
1) ha ha yeah. sorry, I didnt even think of adding it. I just assumed people would just sit there til it finished loading. Will add it in the future episodes.

2)since I answered it to Zabutei, I'll just Copy+Paste it. "you aren't supposed to know for what and why these 2 factions are fighting for til Ep. 2 which is why Ep. 2 comes out til after ep.3 comes out. Makes sense? Its like I give you 2 episodes that are supposed to confuse you yet intrigue you into wanting to know whats going on. and then ep.2 will fill in the gap between 1 and 3 (obviously) and everything will make sense.?" I'll add some more. Kinda like a Tarantino movie where he tends to start in the middle of the story and then go back to the beginning and then the End.

3)I'll agree to this. I guess it was just lazy on my part but I honestly didn't even notice til I was far into it. But the white haired guy who is actually just a cameo from my other Flash story, is always smiling while fighting even when he is being punished. He's psycho like that.

4) This is part my fault and part my comps fault. This project, even though its short in length was the biggest file size I've ever done. Much of the flash is all frame by frame, Mainly the fight part where the girl(Nawa) and the white haired guy(Danny) are inside the room. The turn around frames where Danny dashes in with his scorpion claws took like 2 hours and its like 1 second of animation if that and then spin kick where Nawa kicks the wall took like 6 hours. Since Flash kept crashing. Part of this issue was because my comp is/was realllllly old. I was only working with 512mbs or Ram. Creating a frame would literally take 30 secs. Im not joking. Half way thru I upgraded ti 2gigs of Ram. So now I can work at a much faster rate. =D
(kinda went on a rant there. So I just was looking to cut corners here then there while working with my old ass comp)

5) This is where I have a biiiig problem. BGs and my biggest issue, I SUCK at them big time. Which is why I try to keep them as simple as possible. and less diff angles. But I have to get over that fear sooner or later. So I guess I will try and experiment.

6)Other people have told me this as well. 2 reasons why I didn't even look to this. 1. I have tried it before and it was such a nightmare. People dropping left and right for no reason. or agreeing and then never sending their lines. and 2. These characters are not my characters, They are/were created by members of Vinnies Forums, so I don't know how they sound or what their mannerism of speech is.

7) Very easy really, just a bunch of strokes and then putting a blur and glow filter on them.

Not harsh at all, all the complaints are understandable. And are useful for future episodes.
Thank your for watching and for the review